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cinderella 03-10-2010 09:35 PM

Ol' Jet...you have made me cry...your story is so similar to mine. Unlike you, I have yet to learn to let go of the past.

You have such a beautiful talent. Please continue writing, I enjoy it so very much...eloquence personified.

Jet 03-10-2010 09:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cinderella (Post 64525)
Ol' Jet...you have made me cry...your story is so similar to mine. Unlike you, I have yet to learn to let go of the past.

You have such a beautiful talent. Please continue writing, I enjoy it so very much...eloquence personified.


Thank you Carmen.

Jet 04-07-2010 10:41 PM

Dance #16: Would You?
 
Dance #16: Would You?

If I sat next to you would you think I cared?
If I asked you to slow dance, would you?

Would you run through hayfields
and laugh away the years with me?

Would you kiss me in the moonlight?
Would you teach me how?

Would you join me in a life long duet?

I wonder.

Would you love me heart and soul?



Jet 10-20-2010 05:03 PM

Dance #37

All it took was glance
you spin me
could it be so simple?

bop doo wop
do me again

I slip into your arms
and every care fades
and you tell me

turn the lights low,
come on turn 'em low


Hold me close
we can go anywhere
for the night

back in time
you're the song
that I play over and over

you tell me

I feel romantic
and the record change
is automatic


this old cat
this old poet
this old dreamer

Pretty baby you daze me
and craze me
and I could get comfortable

to hug a hug and kiss a kiss
so put me in the mood

kiss me and never let me go
you'll break me
so take me
and never let me go

—The Dancer of Atlanta

that sweet sax, baby...can you hear it?



LipstickLola 10-20-2010 10:23 PM

[QUOTE=Jet;211244][CENTER]Dance #37

All it took was glance
you spin me
could it be so simple?

bop doo wop
do me again

I slip into your arms
and every care fades
and you tell me

turn the lights low,
come on turn 'em low


Hold me close
we can go anywhere
for the night

back in time
you're the song
that I play over and over

you tell me

I feel romantic
and the record change
is automatic


this old cat
this old poet
this old dreamer

Pretty baby you daze me
and craze me
and I could get comfortable

to hug a hug and kiss a kiss
so put me in the mood

kiss me and never let me go
you'll break me
so take me
and never let me go

—The Dancer of Atlanta

that sweet sax, baby...can you hear it?



Niiiiice
and btw, good sax is highly underrated! ;)

Jet 10-22-2010 03:44 PM

thank you........

LipstickLola 10-22-2010 06:30 PM

So much of yourself poured out into words, I'm filled with emotion while reading, thanking you.

Jet 10-23-2010 07:42 PM

Thanks for spending time in here


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