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Tommi 11-14-2009 06:35 AM

Haiku~Youku~Meku:Poems Prose and Passion
 
Haiku, Youku, Meku,
Poems Prose and Passion

A fun place to post ~ little or long ~ traditional hakiu or whatever youku or meku likeu. English majors beware, typo's ignored, just a place to hang it on the Planet's wall.

That be me and you
Writing things to say right here
Any way you want.


Tommi


California NO..
Not the right forum for this
Begging Medussa for help

It's early here now
knowing the Planet's Admin
Location will fix

Tween help or PM
Amazing she swoops right in
Fixes all the din.

Tommi 11-14-2009 07:24 AM

Examples
 
"What are some examples of Haiku poetry

An English written haiku poem is usually focused on nature (this includes seasons). The poem expresses a single feeling or impression. It contains three lines that do not rhyme. The syllables are traditionally broken up this way:

Line One: Five Syllables


Line Two: Seven Syllables


Line Three: Five Syllables




Some examples:

Rain like emotion
Expressive, cleansing the air
Now I need not cry
The clouds sing softly
Of division and limits
I do not listen
the colour of rain
flowing freely from the sky
relief to the land

snapping a dry twig
between thumb and foprefinger
I break the silence

(-- Ellen Weston, Moonset, The Newspaper, Autumn/Winter

Tommi 11-14-2009 07:28 AM

The beaches waves hit
 
and some more fun..

"*Remember, punctuation and indention is arbitrary (meaning it’s up to you, the author to put it in your poem)

Here's your chance to try your hand at writing Haiku. If you want some inspiration, visit the one of the many Haiku pages online.

The beaches waves hit
Sounding of flooding water
Soothes aches all over
-Tiffany, age 13, L.A.

Silence around us
Our watchful eyes hear the world
Hands do the talking
-Jennifer, Virginia

To be a leader,
One must first dream then act out,
fulfillment is yours.
-Mrs. C Troop 280, St. Petersburg, Florida

The wind is blowing
It is blowing very hard
I don't like the wind.
-Amanda, Alabama


http://www.international.ucla.edu/sh...HaikuPoems.htm


Tommi 11-14-2009 08:27 AM

Saturday Dreamin'
 
Saturday morning off and running :elefant:
Weighing what to do today
Cleaners groceries no time for sunning
Stop at Home Depot and come what may
Bulbs for the garden
Envronmetally friendly yard spray :sheep::sheep::sheep:
Tools and new gadgets then
Off to Sears,cart filled with Craftsmen

Call the girl while enroute just to say
Honey , I love you. It's a beautiful day:elefant: :lips:

Return home and look at the yard :cuttree:
It's nap time, oh no it's morning
i worked just too tooo hard..

PoeticWitch 11-14-2009 09:45 AM

um going to give this a try... but haikus were not my strong suit.. and I dont like having to put only a certain amount of words in a line.. so please dont be mad at me for not following that particular rule...

thou low stain perish
thee happier in decay
wisdom in death

oh yeah I should have warned you.. I am rather morbid... you can always tell me to go somewhere else..I will not be insulted or upset in any way.. so cheerio have a nice day

Hudson 11-14-2009 10:23 PM

candy corn in couch...
didn't buy any this year.
you still taste good though.

:chainsaw:

violaine 11-14-2009 10:36 PM

scratching maple leaf
quivering, indecisive
hovers like a crab
ready for some feet to chase
on a windless trail

Kast 11-14-2009 11:03 PM

Sugar Baby stuck in teeth,
What a glob of messed up mess.
Good to be among friends.

shadows papa 11-17-2009 08:28 PM

Raindrops swiftly fall
Crying tears when i cannot
Storms rage on inside

Tommi 11-17-2009 09:01 PM

El Pollo Loco

Drive thru chiken breasts tonite

Ewww that sounds awful

Tommi 11-17-2009 09:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ben-Her (Post 5581)
candy corn in couch...
didn't buy any this year.
you still taste good though.

:chainsaw:

:clap: :dimbulb:

Tommi 11-17-2009 09:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shadows papa (Post 7468)
Raindrops swiftly fall
Crying tears when i cannot
Storms rage on inside

visual feeling, TY
:flowers:

Tommi 11-17-2009 09:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by rubber.ducky (Post 5208)
um going to give this a try... but haikus were not my strong suit.. and I dont like having to put only a certain amount of words in a line.. so please dont be mad at me for not following that particular rule...

thou low stain perish
thee happier in decay
wisdom in death

oh yeah I should have warned you.. I am rather morbid... you can always tell me to go somewhere else..I will not be insulted or upset in any way.. so cheerio have a nice day

Quote:

Originally Posted by violaine (Post 5592)
scratching maple leaf
quivering, indecisive
hovers like a crab
ready for some feet to chase
on a windless trail

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kam (Post 5600)
Sugar Baby stuck in teeth,
What a glob of messed up mess.
Good to be among friends.

We have some good haiku.....YEAHHHHhhh..

See, that be you, me , we , haiku..seeeeee

shadows papa 11-18-2009 01:05 PM

Wolf waits in silence
As his mate heals her heart wounds
Solitude like night



Hawk soars far above
Unfettered by earthly bonds
Free from sorrow now

Bit 11-18-2009 01:39 PM

silly little dog
you are your mama's delight
please don't bark at night

violaine 11-27-2009 07:34 PM

look just to the left
and focus on the fencing
struggle in the night

shadows papa 11-27-2009 09:58 PM

Wolf stalks silently
Seeking the rushing lifeblood
Of prey held captive

Passionaria 11-28-2009 03:31 AM

Ballerina
 
living on steamed milk
lithe cats, masters of movement
devoted to pain

it begins so young
expressing pain beautifully
such fierce eloquence

when you watch her dance
you will never see her flinch
pain and art collide

Ballet, the dance of
eloquent masochism
art on bleeding toes

:blueheels:Passionaria

violaine 11-28-2009 02:40 PM

streams in november
measured beats, calling to flocks
en route to the roost

i feel them pulling
high in their sky heading east
kissed awake by sun



shadows papa 11-29-2009 12:11 PM

My two dogs sleeping
One on legs one on my chest
Furry warmth soothes me

violaine 12-10-2009 02:21 PM

flurry of starlings
unconscious of gatecrasher
rufous bars gray-blue

Blaze 12-10-2009 08:22 PM

I sit lonely in an empty parking lot

Oh bank close on Saturday


I know, I know, come on Blaze, that's not a haiku :readfineprint:

Pixie 12-10-2009 09:53 PM

Rambling fingers
 
Shinning blue waves
Surround me as I sleep
Floating my dreams awake

My eyes see nothing
As my mind paints its portrait
A hopeful future

Floating with hope's desire
I begin to swim onward
Brush strokes leading me

Streaks of yellow and red
Blend into my painted life
Mixing truth and fear

Fading red to pink
White changes the course in route
Splashing a new dream

Jewels of purple chance
Offer this painting a home
Protected from lies

Lies that carry hurt
Smearing on unwanted black
Changing what began

Drowning the past deep
I start again surrounded
Floating my dreams awake

always2late 01-13-2010 10:50 AM

My heart flies apart
In the wasteland of my chest
Crows in a churchyard

afixer 04-22-2010 08:20 PM




it was that very moment

doom and gloom from inside her head

that moment erased all doubt

Tommi 04-22-2010 08:36 PM

I watched the grains of sand piling on high shimmering
glistening mound with one sparkling peak
quiclky I turn the hourglass sideways
time in my hands I heard it
quietly slipping
silence
now
somewhere peaks build again
turning it over and over starting again
watch ticking, sounding, beating, earth
sparkling dew dropping earth shares her tears
I can't stop the sands of time, now the heart not beating
seeing a baby I hear the laughter and joy another life now throbbing

Passionaria 05-02-2010 06:59 PM

being Daddies girl
you make naughty feel so good
how can I resist?
http://dl4.glitter-graphics.net/pub/...fbi6usfnqz.gif


Passionaria 05-14-2010 07:17 AM

Secret place
 
erotic secrets
you my aphrodisiac
breathless surrender

http://img2.visualizeus.com/thumbs/0...722ebb38_h.jpg

violaine 05-18-2010 09:38 PM

bushnell straps go through
crops of flat land and sugar
sliding down my jeans

Tommi 05-18-2010 10:26 PM

:cherry:
Maraschino stem
chewed from juicy round and plump
knotted now for you
:cherry:

Spirit Dancer 05-18-2010 11:28 PM

Alabaster sky
Floating overheard drifting
secretly I'm there

Tommi 05-19-2010 08:09 AM

Take time to smell the roses
 
Five bushes in bloom
Soon to add a color new
Six years cancer free

afixer 05-19-2010 09:13 AM



things that you just know

the ten year old enlightens me often

trust is such a crap-shoot

Spirit Dancer 05-19-2010 09:26 AM

My fallen brother
starshine moonbeams glisten now
watching from above

Passionaria 05-24-2010 02:29 AM

the love in my touch
fluttering butterfly wings
caressing your face
http://www.dreamstime.com/blue-butte...umb8225274.jpg

Tommi 05-24-2010 07:41 AM

Monday Haiku-No, it's only May
 
Monday Monday, It's
another Monday and no
Monday night football


:supermanbooth:

afixer 06-10-2010 06:18 AM



yes, you would know me

shooter take aim

better than the time before

kittygrrl 11-13-2011 02:37 AM

Love is a fire
toxic consumed desire
makes you a liar

Femmultimate 11-20-2011 01:00 AM

no regrets I said
growing every day I see
regrets can be wise

chai~ 01-28-2012 03:18 AM

you sexy hunka
my eyes mosey all over
the butch you wear well

In my mind I crawl
over the playground that is
your body's stature

sweet nothing's whispered
butterfly kisses placed here
and there again and

again, till you swoon
and crave all of me like I
crave nothing but you




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