Quote:
Originally Posted by Hollylane
My first attempt at Gogyohka:
• 5 lines of free verse
• No set syllable pattern
• Short & succinct lines, governed by the duration of a single breath
• Captures an idea, memory, observation or feeling in a few compelling words
I think I may have missed the mark on "succinct"....gif "Say What?")
Anyway...Here it is:
Is what you are experiencing
Through lengthy conversations
With eagerly parted lips
enough to know both the satiation and the hunger
of wholehearted love?
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I'd say you're spot on. Lots to remember ... I might need to try this sometime.