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Old 11-16-2009, 09:59 AM   #11
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The way I understand it is - The third line is the most important, it's what you're really talking about, the other two are descriptive in an 'off' way of the third, like:

The roaring lion
Ravishes its prey - consumes.
Oh! My dang head hurts.


But, what do I know?...

Discuss.


Now, MY dang head hurts
When I think of discussion.
"Fucku" means nothing?


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