The Dancer of Atlanta - Page 2

cinderella · 03-10-2010, 09:35 PM

Ol' Jet...you have made me cry...your story is so similar to mine. Unlike you, I have yet to learn to let go of the past.

You have such a beautiful talent. Please continue writing, I enjoy it so very much...eloquence personified.

Jet · 03-10-2010, 09:38 PM

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Originally Posted by cinderella

Ol' Jet...you have made me cry...your story is so similar to mine. Unlike you, I have yet to learn to let go of the past.

You have such a beautiful talent. Please continue writing, I enjoy it so very much...eloquence personified.

Thank you Carmen.

Jet · 04-07-2010, 10:41 PM

Dance #16: Would You?

If I sat next to you would you think I cared?
If I asked you to slow dance, would you?

Would you run through hayfields
and laugh away the years with me?

Would you kiss me in the moonlight?
Would you teach me how?

Would you join me in a life long duet?

I wonder.

Would you love me heart and soul?

Jet · 10-20-2010, 05:03 PM

Dance #37

All it took was glance
you spin me
could it be so simple?

bop doo wop
do me again

I slip into your arms
and every care fades
and you tell me

turn the lights low,
come on turn 'em low

Hold me close
we can go anywhere
for the night

back in time
you're the song
that I play over and over

you tell me

I feel romantic
and the record change
is automatic

this old cat
this old poet
this old dreamer

Pretty baby you daze me
and craze me
and I could get comfortable

to hug a hug and kiss a kiss
so put me in the mood

kiss me and never let me go
you'll break me
so take me
and never let me go

—The Dancer of Atlanta

that sweet sax, baby...can you hear it?

LipstickLola · 10-20-2010, 10:23 PM

[QUOTE=Jet;211244][CENTER]Dance #37

All it took was glance
you spin me
could it be so simple?

bop doo wop
do me again

I slip into your arms
and every care fades
and you tell me

turn the lights low,
come on turn 'em low

Hold me close
we can go anywhere
for the night

back in time
you're the song
that I play over and over

you tell me

I feel romantic
and the record change
is automatic

this old cat
this old poet
this old dreamer

Pretty baby you daze me
and craze me
and I could get comfortable

to hug a hug and kiss a kiss
so put me in the mood

kiss me and never let me go
you'll break me
so take me
and never let me go

—The Dancer of Atlanta

that sweet sax, baby...can you hear it?

Niiiiice
and btw, good sax is highly underrated!

Jet · 10-22-2010, 03:44 PM

thank you........

LipstickLola · 10-22-2010, 06:30 PM

So much of yourself poured out into words, I'm filled with emotion while reading, thanking you.

Jet · 10-23-2010, 07:42 PM

Thanks for spending time in here

04-07-2010, 10:41 PM	#23
Jet Timed Out - TOS Drama How Do You Identify?: .. Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: .. Posts: 3,471 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 292 Thanked 2,647 Times in 1,293 Posts Rep Power: 0	Dance #16: Would You? Dance #16: Would You? If I sat next to you would you think I cared? If I asked you to slow dance, would you? Would you run through hayfields and laugh away the years with me? Would you kiss me in the moonlight? Would you teach me how? Would you join me in a life long duet? I wonder. Would you love me heart and soul?

10-20-2010, 10:23 PM	#25
LipstickLola Member How Do You Identify?: Happy Preferred Pronoun?: she Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: planet Earth Posts: 682 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 1,679 Thanked 1,597 Times in 433 Posts Rep Power: 5678217	[QUOTE=Jet;211244][CENTER]Dance #37 All it took was glance you spin me could it be so simple? bop doo wop do me again I slip into your arms and every care fades and you tell me turn the lights low, come on turn 'em low Hold me close we can go anywhere for the night back in time you're the song that I play over and over you tell me I feel romantic and the record change is automatic this old cat this old poet this old dreamer Pretty baby you daze me and craze me and I could get comfortable to hug a hug and kiss a kiss so put me in the mood kiss me and never let me go you'll break me so take me and never let me go —The Dancer of Atlanta that sweet sax, baby...can you hear it? Niiiiice and btw, good sax is highly underrated! __________________ Happiness......it's a choice!!

10-22-2010, 06:30 PM	#27
LipstickLola Member How Do You Identify?: Happy Preferred Pronoun?: she Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: planet Earth Posts: 682 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 1,679 Thanked 1,597 Times in 433 Posts Rep Power: 5678217	*So much of yourself poured out into words, I'm filled with emotion while reading, thanking you.* __________________ Happiness......it's a choice!!

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03-10-2010, 09:35 PM	#21
cinderella Member How Do You Identify?: Pinky's mommy :) Preferred Pronoun?: Su Majestad Relationship Status: Happy with my puppy Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Pocono Mtns., Pa. Posts: 1,238 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 4 Thanked 1,501 Times in 638 Posts Rep Power: 14266108	Ol' Jet...you have made me cry...your story is so similar to mine. Unlike you, I have yet to learn to let go of the past. You have such a beautiful talent. Please continue writing, I enjoy it so very much...eloquence personified.

10-20-2010, 05:03 PM	#24
Jet Timed Out - TOS Drama How Do You Identify?: .. Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: .. Posts: 3,471 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 292 Thanked 2,647 Times in 1,293 Posts Rep Power: 0	Dance #37 All it took was glance you spin me could it be so simple? bop doo wop do me again I slip into your arms and every care fades and you tell me turn the lights low, come on turn 'em low Hold me close we can go anywhere for the night back in time you're the song that I play over and over you tell me I feel romantic and the record change is automatic this old cat this old poet this old dreamer Pretty baby you daze me and craze me and I could get comfortable to hug a hug and kiss a kiss so put me in the mood kiss me and never let me go you'll break me so take me and never let me go —The Dancer of Atlanta that sweet sax, baby...can you hear it?

10-22-2010, 03:44 PM	#26
Jet Timed Out - TOS Drama How Do You Identify?: .. Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: .. Posts: 3,471 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 292 Thanked 2,647 Times in 1,293 Posts Rep Power: 0	thank you........

10-23-2010, 07:42 PM	#28
Jet Timed Out - TOS Drama How Do You Identify?: .. Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: .. Posts: 3,471 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 292 Thanked 2,647 Times in 1,293 Posts Rep Power: 0	Thanks for spending time in here