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11-16-2009, 09:42 AM
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The way I understand it is - The third line is the most important, it's what you're really talking about, the other two are descriptive in an 'off' way of the third, like:
The roaring lion Ravishes its prey - consumes. Oh! My dang head hurts. But, what do I know?... |
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