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To extend my hand again to just One,
one craving unlike no other before to give Him so freely, without hesitation, without reserve, that One the One behind the masks... who's boots i'll earn to kneel before i crave to give my surrender. my decadent reward that sweet heavy thud only to His truth will I bow down to. unspoken intensity, un-tamed souls taken to long awaited edges, pushing un-mentionable boundaries only for His power will I bare my soul yearning for twisted sanity writhing within exquisite taunting hauntingly familiar anticipation, of His magnificent blade beautifully restrained only if He show's me truth.. The truth He will allow me to feel without fear drowning in my decadent sin. He will make me believe as only He can. this craving of His fury, and this craving of souls on His cross, i will bear His fates it shall be my pleasure to earn my place.
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enraptured sweet decadence chained and adored sweet girl bared beholden steel cutting into silken flesh she waits first strike imminent glory twisted curved blade descends from behind tracing patterns sweet droplets decadent blood red kisses along her skin tracing new beginnings carving life awakening of soul washed in sin anew life begins again. (c) miss entycing
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i crave. heightened senses. smell.sense.touch.sight.mind.taste.control...all denied me. knowing when the arm is raised to strike, before it ever is. the decadent whoosh. body dancing to meet each deep lash. the hand at my throat, as my back hits the wall, all at once. the glorious click behind my ear. the ties that bind. stiletto's scraping the wall, again. command. control. obedience. deep drop. i crave. (c) miss entycing
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in the deep night His presence behind me breath hot "shhh... don't you dare move" He says. hands searching running over silkened skin softly tracing out sweetness He turns me without effort arms roughly pulled up restrained within His cuffs His hand finds my throat "I dare you to exhale My sweet" He says, Sadistic eyes bare down on me from above fingers roughened, and so demanding damp wetness found teeth finding flesh first thrust waking me pulling me out of slumber for His pleasure His hand at my throat every glorious inch of Him buried inside me taking what is His "if you exhale, i will stop, and you'll pay a high price" He growls from above, as teeth find my nipples, i dare not cry out for fear of losing my prize steel tip of sharpened blade finds my cheek soft kisses of cold steel along my jaw with each thrust He takes the blade deeper into my flesh as His grip tightens at my throat i am re-born delicate lines, drops of red seeping over my belly like blood red tears of faith green eyes hooded.. daring myself to give more He watches me i see His eyes change and i know He is taking me there falling His hand at my throat bringing me to life washing me clean with His sin brand new i begin with new breath He allows me to breathe. (c) miss entycing
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Blood Vow.
deep in her mind she's restless searching for new faiths deviant edges craved glory of decadent pain she seeks One to sate her sweet sins she reaches into the depths of her fates and what they hold for her there You are watching her every move stalking silent deadly desires await maddeningly in Your thoughts her energy coarses through Your veins taunting, tempting Your power she calls to You to the Sadistic edges of Your mind You feel her and You wait and she comes she reaches for You reaches inside of You beckoning Your heavy hand at her throat raw, brute force brings You through her defenses as she's slammed to the wall to Your wall where she belongs where You want her trembling under Your hand wrapped around her throat Sadistic eyes above her penetrating emotional energy deep, intense fucking her mind penetrating her soul daring her to defy low, deep growls whispered into her sweet, silkened neck telling of her fate sinking teeth deep swift, fast she knows not to cry out He listens to her soul scream and He smiles and His grip tightens bringing her to life for His pleasure swift she's turned facing His wall her arms roughly pulled above her head shackled, suspended from new chains His chains locked tight to Him behind her, His breath hot demanding 'Don't you fucking move' commanding she remains still head snapped back sharp intake of breath escapes and she trembles anticipating her fate they lie in His hands now click. she feels it before she ever hears it sweet burn along her exposed neck He descends... His blade finds it's mark she is his sweet prey and she knows that He is carving His ownership into her skin patterns form mixed within her blood and His sin bared canvas offered to Him willingly without hesitation this is where she sells her soul to Him with her blood. her vow sealed within His sin under His blade she belongs to only Him her soul begs Him to make her new again He smiles. (c) miss entycing. 6/2011.
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Walls.
79th floor. penthouse sun setting through glass walls city coming to life outside below her sweet girl settles in briefcase tossed to the floor keys on the table she reaches for the wine and glass decadent, bold aroma fills her senses first taste on her full red lips she smiles and her mind begins to release stilettos clicking across marble floors silk suit jacket unbuttoned now lying across the wing backed chair as she walks by stopping briefly, short skirt unzipped from the back... hitting the floor at her feet she steps out of it regal in her Leather corset garters, stockings and black stiletto's the beautiful blonde mound between her legs perfect, and moist from her sinful thoughts of Him of seeing Him again of His control.. His power and her mind that He devours with mere thought soft, blonde hair pinned up glasses tilted just so she stretches... and softly sighs thru the door to the bedroom she walks slowly, deliberately.. she pauses and her green eyes fill with wonder reflected off the glass walls that seperate her from the evening sky she sees His shadow watching her from a darkened corner lying in wait she trembles tongue licking full red lips her breath catches as He rises. she's in awe as He comes across the room it takes hours it seems, but it is mere seconds He stands before her closer and closer He looms beckoning with deep eyes while forcing her back to the cool, thick glass wall His gloved hand reaches to touch her face tracing its softness and pulls the ivory hair clip from her hair He steps back to watch it fall around her shoulders and reaches for her neck... collar in hand, He lifts His eyes to her and she raises her hair to receive His gift lovingly, and with deliberate intent, He fastens it around her and puts His hand at her chin, turing her head away, he growls softly 'you are mine, never forget that' and drives His hand inside her furiously, He is hungry for her wetness, her sin against the glass wall His fist devours His sweet girl shes spread before Him bared against the glass, for all the heavens to behold corset falls to the floor at His insistence He takes her and turns her roughly pressing her hands to the glass she loses her sense of sight as He takes it from her pulled tightly across her face decadent deprivation gloved hand on the back of her neck He warns her ' if you move, you will suffer a high price, do you understand me?' 'Yes Sir' she hears Him breathing and He is reflected in the glass wall shes pressed to.. she feels Him there below her, the city lights glow and she's mesmerized by the decadent anticipation of her next fate at His hands heavy thud strikes her silkened back delicious, heavy Leather strips claim her again, again. 'count, my sweet little bitch!' He demands and she begins.. 90, 95, 98... 'I will not be done soon, know this' 127, 133, 139 precious pain taking her to heights only imagined edges long craved.. but only in her mind she climbs deeper, faster and harder with each lash, deeper than the next then silence head snapped back to His reality He is there at her ear 'are you still with me my sweet girl?' 'Yes Sir' 'then you haven't had enough have you?' shes spun around and His hand grips her throat as the other drives deep inside of her fist fucking her choking life from her as she's re-born for Him, to Him ravaged skin at her back, against the cool glass wall she drops deep under His hand she is owned He squeezes once more. (c) miss entycing 6/2011.
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u write is exceptional. For me the story comes to life. I want to Thank u for sharing. I hope to read more soon. U should be published.
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Thanks very much! it's nice when a reader can see it unfold. i am currently submitting some things for a publishing company, and in fact my Lil Red Riding Hood piece on the previous page is one they are considering, and Bound, Blood Vow, and Walls... along with a few more from this thread. thank you kindly! i apprecitate that you took the time to read. indeed, this one did speak to Syr. thanks again for the kind words! glad You are enjoying them.
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"Standing strong, dues no longer owed, lovingly restrained within my own beautiful deviances,
awashed in shames no longer.... reaching, searching no more, allowing myself life.... i am home." a small piece below of one of my new writings was left in the constant craving thread a few days ago... the rest follows, thanks for reading, i hope it's enjoyed. craving. the Beast inside You tearing, clawing, carving, binding, taking, bleeding all of me. as You do. First Cuts decadent new wounds wash me clean in Your sin, drenched in my blood silkened canvas, bared in Your chains You trace my soul as each cut binds me deeper into You You own my screams my tears decadent deep, red, trickles of faith run down my flesh they run to You, they scream for You curved and sharpened is the cold steel of Your blade as an aged pen, taken to silkened and welcoming parchment i await this darkened masterpiece each cut taking me into Your soul each breath i am allowed to take belongs to You You carve me to life my body dances for You delicate red, trickles flow onto steel and mix with Your Leather my tears of lifes blood flow all around You fierce is Your intent, each lash deeper, deliberate wounds deepen for You silkened flesh of Your one precious china doll opens before You and You again take Your place inside my very being carving out O/our place in life, O/our time of rapture shredding my silence with screams of blood red faith it's here at this moment, i sell my soul to You and You devour each second of my sweet terror and submission with the next cut slicing through Your precious doll taken briefly from Your shelf a lifetime will never be enough time to carve Your canvas You claim Ownership of my soul i offer to You deep, warm, red trickles willingly, they fall upon polished boots, where You bid them to fall tearing through my sin, You bring me to life the life You allow me, the life i graciously submit to You i belong to only You my blood, i hand to You willingly and without hesitation paint Your canvas my Lord draw upon my flesh for strength carve unto me a new life in gentle, loving, safe and heavy hands dust off this exquisite creature Your china doll, i am delicate, priceless, a treasure only You behold allow me to rest upon Your shelf with new blood red stories carved upon my skin for only You to behold, to read to feed upon cold steel of Your magnificent blade drenched in my love warm, sweet and true as the tears of red that reach for You, that fall for You each decadent, and maddening drop- You catch they belong to You just as each breath i take, that i am allowed to take belongs to You carve Your canvas with my blood Your blade belongs to me now it carries my scent new life awaits like no other before stories of old come to life in Your hands blood drenched chains rattle softly speaking to You and i the deeper You cut, the farther You step into my soul i breathe You in because You allow me this delicous burn of Your blade sates me like nothing ever imagined timeless this portrait shall become gentle deep red stories of beginnings new life painted in red. (c) miss entycing 12/2011
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that push. roughly to my knees that push. that snaps my head back to behold Him that push. that takes all the breath that He desires from His hand at my throat that push. that drives me to take another 100 strikes, minimum that push. that calms me as my skin is carved to life under His blade that push. that never lets me forget i am owned, and i am at His mercy, though there is none. that push. that sates me to give my all, after i have given Him everything. that push, that calms me... that push that brings me to life. (c) miss entycing 9/2011
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to be cast down into that most decadent place into the deepest darkest depths of my own madness and left there bound tattered carved shredded taken owned for as long as demanded as long as it takes until i stop screaming cast down for as long as i need to come back to life. (c) miss entycing 9/2011
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WoW..!!!!
All of your writings are amazing..!!!..
My personal favorite is Walls.. I better stop there with my comment.. I feel a wolf aproaching behind me.. Gotta say it again -Walls- The best.!!. I love that..!!!. That one needs published.. You are an amazing woman to be able to write like that.. I wish you the best on all your publishings.. s..
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