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Old 11-14-2009, 06:35 AM   #1
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Haiku, Youku, Meku,
Poems Prose and Passion

A fun place to post ~ little or long ~ traditional hakiu or whatever youku or meku likeu. English majors beware, typo's ignored, just a place to hang it on the Planet's wall.

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"What are some examples of Haiku poetry

An English written haiku poem is usually focused on nature (this includes seasons). The poem expresses a single feeling or impression. It contains three lines that do not rhyme. The syllables are traditionally broken up this way:

Line One: Five Syllables


Line Two: Seven Syllables


Line Three: Five Syllables




Some examples:

Rain like emotion
Expressive, cleansing the air
Now I need not cry
The clouds sing softly
Of division and limits
I do not listen
the colour of rain
flowing freely from the sky
relief to the land

snapping a dry twig
between thumb and foprefinger
I break the silence

(-- Ellen Weston, Moonset, The Newspaper, Autumn/Winter
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Old 11-14-2009, 07:28 AM   #3
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Arrow The beaches waves hit

and some more fun..

"*Remember, punctuation and indention is arbitrary (meaning it’s up to you, the author to put it in your poem)

Here's your chance to try your hand at writing Haiku. If you want some inspiration, visit the one of the many Haiku pages online.

The beaches waves hit
Sounding of flooding water
Soothes aches all over
-Tiffany, age 13, L.A.

Silence around us
Our watchful eyes hear the world
Hands do the talking
-Jennifer, Virginia

To be a leader,
One must first dream then act out,
fulfillment is yours.
-Mrs. C Troop 280, St. Petersburg, Florida

The wind is blowing
It is blowing very hard
I don't like the wind.
-Amanda, Alabama


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Saturday morning off and running
Weighing what to do today
Cleaners groceries no time for sunning
Stop at Home Depot and come what may
Bulbs for the garden
Envronmetally friendly yard spray
Tools and new gadgets then
Off to Sears,cart filled with Craftsmen

Call the girl while enroute just to say
Honey , I love you. It's a beautiful day

Return home and look at the yard
It's nap time, oh no it's morning
i worked just too tooo hard..
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Old 11-14-2009, 09:45 AM   #5
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um going to give this a try... but haikus were not my strong suit.. and I dont like having to put only a certain amount of words in a line.. so please dont be mad at me for not following that particular rule...

thou low stain perish
thee happier in decay
wisdom in death

oh yeah I should have warned you.. I am rather morbid... you can always tell me to go somewhere else..I will not be insulted or upset in any way.. so cheerio have a nice day
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didn't buy any this year.
you still taste good though.

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scratching maple leaf
quivering, indecisive
hovers like a crab
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Sugar Baby stuck in teeth,
What a glob of messed up mess.
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Raindrops swiftly fall
Crying tears when i cannot
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Drive thru chiken breasts tonite

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um going to give this a try... but haikus were not my strong suit.. and I dont like having to put only a certain amount of words in a line.. so please dont be mad at me for not following that particular rule...

thou low stain perish
thee happier in decay
wisdom in death

oh yeah I should have warned you.. I am rather morbid... you can always tell me to go somewhere else..I will not be insulted or upset in any way.. so cheerio have a nice day
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Sugar Baby stuck in teeth,
What a glob of messed up mess.
Good to be among friends.
We have some good haiku.....YEAHHHHhhh..

See, that be you, me , we , haiku..seeeeee
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Wolf waits in silence
As his mate heals her heart wounds
Solitude like night



Hawk soars far above
Unfettered by earthly bonds
Free from sorrow now
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silly little dog
you are your mama's delight
please don't bark at night
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look just to the left
and focus on the fencing
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it begins so young
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streams in november
measured beats, calling to flocks
en route to the roost

i feel them pulling
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