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11-21-2009, 02:41 AM | #1 |
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lifting the veil of nights silence
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from pen to sketchbook heart gushing pain phrased beauty emotions flowing rivers of poems verbal enshrinement's to love volumes bound in pain each poem a ghost calling her name back to life internet hauntings sentimentos canciones corta vena aaaaye Bendito cut me to the bone corazón está roto with death in your eyes carino mio my heart could not bear to watch your suffering for love ~*~ intoxicating poetic Belladonna sad tender sadist poisonous flower enchant me into darkness Datura mio sacrificed my heart at the altar of hys pain and left me bleeding so cold tan sola my hearts blood is on your knife exquisite Sadist from my wounded heart blood red Datura blossoms in your memory
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Noches de bohemia
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Storming inside and out
Even at three am the Texas heat is unbearable. The scorched red earth of the Hill Country has baked dry, cracking like the sun drenched face of a thousand year old woman. Plants, like fragile Southern Bells grow faint from heat exhaustion, while trees stand comatose, not daring to move a single leaf. It feels as if the land is holding its breath, afraid to make one wrong move.
One wrong move I think, tears rolling down my face, can change everything. I had never behaved like that before, so hurt and angry that I couldn’t even remember what I had said. I’m sure it wasn’t pretty I thought to myself, sniffling, as I gently sucked the last morsel of chocolate clinging to my manicured fingertips. The sweetness of the chocolate was a welcome contrast to the pain raging in my heart. But not quite as helpful as the Merlot I sipped, as I sat on the front porch, curled up on the sea grass sofa, watching the night. A breeze rustles through dry leaves, laced with the familiar scent of dust. While grayish blue clouds morph the starry sky, into an ominous warning, whose energy feels like a snake recoiling ready to strike. Oh stop teasing me, I thought, directing my pain at the sky, instead of you. It hasn’t rained in months. Lightning pierces the darkness, electricity burning through my heart. The only sound I hear is the wind, blowing like the tormented thoughts in my mind. The plants quiver reaching out to be quenched, as does my heart. The outside and the inside feel the same tonight, the synchronicity bringing me peace. This storm and I are one, as I wander out under the night sky. Rain begins to fall cool on my skin, giving life to earth, and my soul. Inhibition dissolves into this merging, and I remove my clothes stretching my torso across the hood of my neighbor’s car. My feet spread apart, my hips following the line of warm metal. Face down, my long hair flowing across red paint. Rain is beating down on my skin; stinging, cooling, cleansing. Cool water quenching the dryness of my lips, rolling across swollen eyelids, massaging tense shoulders, torrents running from my fingertips. Tears of this raging storm gush down the valley of my spine like a flash flood, then splashes over the roundness of my hips, and lush bare bottom, before finding the inside of my thighs, and rushing to join the waiting earth. The skies passionate release washing away the storm in me. I laid there cleansed and entranced, until the fleeting storm transformed into a rising mist permeating the night air. Finally rising, spent, amazed at the markings my body lotion has created. A woman’s face, breasts, waist, hips and thighs smeared onto the red paint of my neighbor’s car. Laughing softly, poor thing, I wonder how he is going to explain that. Pashi Yes, I know this is a story, but it just feels better to me to keep my musings in one tightly spot. A place where all the creatures of my overactive mind are already familiar with each other.~ Passionaria
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Pele's daughter
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Pele's Daughter Fragrant White Ginger emerges from jet black Lava rock intoxicating me drunk on beauty Blue oceans crash caressing you, leaving rainbows to dance from water drops even the sea offers treasures at your feet Fierce beauty Goddess of FIRE Scorching your essence into my soul Setting my heart afire once burnt Forever longing for you OFFERING you flowers feelings arise Tears move like lava flows shifting my soul out of numbness into enchantment Twice you have saved my life Secrets between you and I grateful I throw flowers at your feet offerings of love Aloha Bound deeply to you Passionaria
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11-22-2009, 10:09 PM | #5 |
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{{{ Awren }}}
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This poem is dedicated to you Awren, our delicious debutante of the 9 word extravaganza: autumn silence foggy softness path share chair lucky day Fogged in Autumn's dense foggy silence engulfs the coastline extending tendrils of mist like swirling ghosts that creep up mountain paths to devour helpless redwoods swirling ghosts who haunt desolate roadways with thick opaque softness that insists the lucid movement of day surrenders into it's dreamy grasp lucky to have found a roadside cafe I settle into a plush fireside chair devoted to my steamy espresso held captive while the ocean and the land share a cold moist embrace Passionaria
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Hi Wildcat,
I appreciate you taking the time to read, and then actually comment, allot! Thanks. Pashi
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12-01-2009, 08:21 PM | #9 |
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fantastic writing Passionaria. Simply beautiful.
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As you know, I too, find your impassioned writing absolutely exquisite..."One wrong move I think, tears rolling down my face, can change everything..." so powerful in that context---brilliant!... There are many good writers here, in my opinion. I'm thinking this might be a safe place to reveal another side of me...
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I shouted from Olympus
whispering there against your flesh so loudly that the dead night came alive in a bright swatch of moonlight silvered across your face like a shining blade tatooed upon your still-bleeding from old wounds cheek I connect small circles on your shoulder in ever-brightening light with touch lighter than you than I have imagined resided in fingertips that have delivered a thousand other messages in a million other welcoming eager hungry angry places on your perfectly mastered body Our synergized imperfect past has empassioned the us in you and I to claw our way to the pinnacle of betrayal of all they told us to hold dear and we could do that in the darkest of endless souless nights you and I... I insisting and you gratefully accepting that I am God of gods in every tone of ungodly voice... but the earth has shifted now You and I Us We are awash in moonlight I have never fallen to my humility in the light to speak unfamiliar words 'til I traced circles on your shoulders and whispered from Olympus with virgin voice so strong that even I believed the music in it
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Your poem evokes a feeling in me of dangerous, tenderness, feelings that are both soothing and unnerving at the same time, like a gently wind that caresses before the storm arrives. "in a bright swatch of moonlight silvered across your face like a shining blade tatooed upon your still-bleeding from old wounds cheek I connect small circles on your shoulder in ever-brightening light with touch lighter than you than I have imagined" "Our synergized imperfect past has empassioned the us in you and I to claw our way to the pinnacle of betrayal of all they told us to hold dear and we could do that in the darkest of endless souless nights" Haunting, acknowledging the cravings..... that calling to the darkness. Then back to your own surprise of tenderness....Fabulous evocative writing!! What a treat, Aye, Aye, Aye! Pashi
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These are really great Passionaria!! Dont stop writing lady ... That would be a huge loss Jax
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