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Old 08-07-2018, 10:27 AM   #1
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I was playing with my bass guitar earlier, and suddenly remembered a bit of something I came up with quite a few years ago, and managed to shape it into a little song (I actually have a tune for this one!).

The girl that I love (don't love me)

I'm in love with a really nice girl
She's got my head going in a whirl,
But oh my love can never be,
'Cause the girl that I love don't love me.

She ain't pretty, she's kind of plain,
But how I love her just the same,
And now my life's sweet misery,
'Cause the girl that I love don't love me.

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Love is gentle and love is kind,
And love is cruel 'cause love is blind.
I wish I never felt this way,
'Cause the girl that I love isn't gay.

When she smiles, it lights my world,
She's such a sweet and lovely girl
But oh my love can never be,
'Cause the girl that I love don't love me.
No, the girl that I love don't love me.
The girl that I love..
.. don't love me.
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Just a quick note - I havent given up on writing here, it's just that between working on my degree and a lot of poor health, I havent had the time, mental energy or inspiration to write anything new for months :-( I have still been making notes for writing projects I want to develop some day, but mo idea when there'll be anything to show for any of them, as yet.

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Aaaaand I STILL haven't wandered off into the sunset! I've had a heck of lot going on between a resit exam, degree-related appointments and various health-related issues (generally getting better despite ups and downs) and appointments. On the plus side, I came up with an almost complete poem the other day - if it knocks into shape well enough, I'll post it here.

I'm going to be involved in a collaborative writing effort soon, too. Depending on how that turns out, and if my co-author is happy for me to do so, I might be posting snippets from that here, eventually.

Aside from that (and degree-related stuff) what I've been writing has been a rather jumbled mess of reminiscences and thoughts on random subjects that occur to me that I'm hoping to collect into something readable eventually. Don't get yer hopes up, but just maybe bits of that might start appearing here too.
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