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I lie awake as darkness falls and
Listen for the sound of silence. It touches a part of me that no one sees and only I can feel. It's my heart laid open like a book thats being read. Or a curtain that has yet to be closed. It's my greatest treasure down deep the depth that no one knows. A colour of beauty that would steal your breath away. |
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No matter how many days
we spend apart I still have a place for you right here in my heart a tiny little nook set aside for you no matter what you say or no matter what you do it doesn't matter how the world might spin from end to end that little place will still remain a refuge for a friend. You'll always have that place no matter how things go if some day you come to find you must move along, just know there will be no animosity no anger or despair just someone who always cared and wanted to be there You've given me a gift I never can repay you've given me myself again somewhere along the way. You remind me of the Texas sky at the end of a perfect day when the ribbons of red reach far and wide then fade to deepest grey it's all a part and parcel of the mystery that is you I hope that I shall never lose that moment when I knew you were the woman I wanted to know and to keep a little close the one who brightened up my life and made me less a ghost.
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Raven
Verdict Rendering Shouts Whisper Wing Eye Soul Cradle Take your sign of death, your raven that sits upon my heart.<<disallowed word>> My heart is not dead yet.<<disallowed word>> You cannot steal my soul to quench your desire of need.<<disallowed word>> You cannot cradle my soul and expect me to just lay.<<disallowed word>> You will hear my shouts of protest and know my wrath.<<disallowed word>> You will know that I will not go willingly.<<disallowed word>> I will stand up and look you in the eye and whisper in your ear with venom.<<disallowed word>> " I am me and I choose to stand strong with hope and faith " I give this to you as my rendering, a statement, a fact. "<<disallowed word>> This is my life's verdict.<<disallowed word>> "I will love again." <<disallowed word>>Take this on a wing and a prayer.<<disallowed word>> |
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what a great thread! Thank you Cinderella for making it and inviting us to share
I must say all of these poems hit me for so many different reasons,thank you all for sharing them ![]() let it burn...be consumed in the flames tears stream silent falling like rain.. wash my face cleanse my soul.. bring me back out again whole.. ...with each emotion comes a price feelings are like rolling the dice even when one is pure and true its opposite is waiting to claim you Ri~ in sorrow we see the better side of the you and me in pain we digress to scared to confess in love we are blind to all rhythm and rhyme in hate we are consumed by the flame of doom in happiness we feel like conquering the world Ri~ |
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![]() disenchantment: (English) Singular Noun (plural noun-uncountable) 1.the act of disenchanting or the state of being disenchanted. 2. freeing from false belief or illusions ~*~Disenchantment~*~ You say I don’t exist Yet I lie here in your arms So how did I end up here Once I fell for your charms? All the times I wanted you So close and yet so far I could almost reach and touch you- Like grasping for a star. I listen to your heartbeat And feel the breath you take, I touch the warmth of your skin As I lie here and I break. But when you talk I hear you And tears fall down my face, When you say I that I’m not real That I don’t have a place. You gently kiss my lips And run your fingers through my hair So why did I feel these things When I’m not even there? To you, I don’t exist And yet you held me tight, As the moon left for the sun And morning replaced the night. ~Laney (c) ![]()
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Yay!!! I love poems that rhyme!!! Loved it!
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You're more then welcom,luv2. Glad you are enjoying the posts. I particularly liked this one of yours...very touching.
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![]() up and down and round again wondering if today it will end love falls on deaf ears bringing the sound of my fear gently i sway ...to the rhythm I play in my heart so true the beat is for you lyrics in my head fall like spent lead Ri~ you didnt see,couldnt feel the hurt inside was so real finding ways to cope with loss wondering why its so easy to toss your words ring false and untrue I'll never get over you one day I will lift my head face the world feeling dead life has been good to me raise my glass and let it be have a drink on me toast my pain lift your glass and let it rain down your throat it slides warm as fire as it glides its ok I learned life is that way consume me in the flame so I rise again another day Ri~ |
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You walked away so long ago
I cried so at the start I've tried so hard to love again But how, without my heart. Among the things you took with you When you walked out the door, My soul, my heart My faith in love, Now lost forevermore.
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Fear is something to be conquered.........
Morgan Think what you want, I don’t care, you surrounded me and lied to me. You said they would hurt me, so I feared them. You said they would laugh at me, so I hid….. ... I believed every word you said, I trusted you, now I know it wasn’t true and I am left with nothing more than a shell of who I am. All my life I have been afraid to live. I have continuously walked in others’ shoes. I played it safe, fearing the worst, afraid to participate in my own life. Morphing into people I met along the way, a piece here, a piece there, until one day I became them, all of them. Like some warped and grotesque figure, staring back in the mirror. Who is this person, who are they all looking back at me? How did she know, she says “oh you cannot hide”, now it is time to face my demons, oh how I want to run…… My muscles have grown tired and I have grown weaker, with each passing day I have grown weaker, today is my fight, today is my day, My mind is mine, my body is mine, and now I know MY LIFE IS MINE. I am no longer a child……..I have no excuses, MY LIFE IS MINE. |
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Never love a stranger
they'll take your heart away they'll set it loose on the northern wind and there will be no way that you can get it back. Never love a stranger they'll leave you feeling sad and wishing that what you wanted was more than what you had but you will have nothing. Never love a stranger they'll be quiet when they leave with the lights still out and the curtains drawn they will try to make you believe that they'll be back.... 2/25/12
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My first attempt at Gogyohka:
• 5 lines of free verse • No set syllable pattern • Short & succinct lines, governed by the duration of a single breath • Captures an idea, memory, observation or feeling in a few compelling words I think I may have missed the mark on "succinct"... ![]() Anyway...Here it is: Is what you are experiencing Through lengthy conversations With eagerly parted lips enough to know both the satiation and the hunger of wholehearted love? |
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I hang in the eternal still space between whistle and strike
A single exquisite banquet or a cornucopia Will I arch or hollow Either way a crossing on that old Windy Tree, the Gallows Horse.
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