Finish the story...

WomenMoveMe · 11-09-2011, 05:56 PM

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Kent · 11-09-2011, 07:07 PM

Ah, c'mon and give us the real ending to your story.. Enquiring minds want to know..

WomenMoveMe · 11-09-2011, 07:26 PM

Was just given a suggestion that makes a ton of sense. I mentioned earlier to feel free to add a chapter. What I should have said was feel free to add a line...a paragraph...a chapter...whatever strikes you.

Hope to hear from you!!

xxzalciaiomenxx · 11-14-2011, 01:31 AM

Thought maybe I would write a little to see if others would follow!

I handed Tandoori back the bottle, she took a long swallow, her eyes closed as she drank. I took this moment to look over her body more closely. I noticed the smooth skin, covered in tattoos, the piercings calling attention to themselves as the light reflected upon the metal. Tandoori handed me the bottle when she was finished. I took a drink, and smiled at her. "Soooo..." I said. "I must admit, that was my first experience of looking at a cucumber as anything but a vegetable" Tandoori smiled kinda slyly, "Well you know a girls gotta do what a girls gotta do, and I don't get many people that are interested in me in that manner," she said, "Plus with the cucumber there are no expectations after wards" "Yeah I guess not, no need for pillow talk or terms of endearment" I joke.

Passionaria · 12-23-2011, 12:45 AM

I am loving this idea, but I have to admit I am a bit speechless. You had me cracking up, and astonished at the same time. Nice writing BTW. I am going to have to let this marinade and see what arises. (no pun intended) Well maybe a little. You did a great job in setting up the characters. I'll be back.

Pashi

WomenMoveMe · 12-23-2011, 05:34 AM

Yes...I know it is an odd sort of story. I sat to write something and that is what came out. I wish I could...and I know I should...explain myself...but I can't. At least you thought it was somewhat funny however strange the premise!

Truly Scrumptious · 12-23-2011, 11:20 AM

You and Tandoori
Now fascinate all of us
Don't leave us hanging!

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Originally Posted by WomenMoveMe

Yes...I know it is an odd sort of story. I sat to write something and that is what came out. I wish I could...and I know I should...explain myself...but I can't. At least you thought it was somewhat funny however strange the premise!

Passionaria · 12-24-2011, 04:12 AM

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Originally Posted by WomenMoveMe

Yes...I know it is an odd sort of story. I sat to write something and that is what came out. I wish I could...and I know I should...explain myself...but I can't. At least you thought it was somewhat funny however strange the premise!

Actually I really like it, it just took me by surprise. But I feel it's bold and intriguing. I was driving around this evening thinking about it and how it might unfold. I'm trying to feel out where I could chime in, it's brewing. It's the perfect set up for an erotic adventure. HMMM

Pashi

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WomenMoveMe Member How Do You Identify?: I just wander about and be! Relationship Status: Caution: Dead End Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Kentucky Posts: 561 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 1,473 Thanked 2,099 Times in 417 Posts Rep Power: 21474851	Suggestion Was just given a suggestion that makes a ton of sense. I mentioned earlier to feel free to add a chapter. What I should have said was feel free to add a line...a paragraph...a chapter...whatever strikes you. Hope to hear from you!!

11-14-2011, 01:31 AM	#4
xxzalciaiomenxx Junior Member How Do You Identify?: Dyke Preferred Pronoun?: Her/She/sugarbear! Relationship Status: In a relationship with the love of my life Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: wv Posts: 46 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 42 Thanked 190 Times in 27 Posts Rep Power: 1205267	Thought maybe I would write a little to see if others would follow! I handed Tandoori back the bottle, she took a long swallow, her eyes closed as she drank. I took this moment to look over her body more closely. I noticed the smooth skin, covered in tattoos, the piercings calling attention to themselves as the light reflected upon the metal. Tandoori handed me the bottle when she was finished. I took a drink, and smiled at her. "Soooo..." I said. "I must admit, that was my first experience of looking at a cucumber as anything but a vegetable" Tandoori smiled kinda slyly, "Well you know a girls gotta do what a girls gotta do, and I don't get many people that are interested in me in that manner," she said, "Plus with the cucumber there are no expectations after wards" "Yeah I guess not, no need for pillow talk or terms of endearment" I joke. __________________ Love seeketh not itself to please, Nor for itself hath any care, But for another gives its ease, And builds a Heaven in Hell's despair. -WILLIAM BLAKE

12-23-2011, 12:45 AM	#5
Passionaria Senior Member How Do You Identify?: Urban Bohemian : http://youtu.be/IM96Ch9Gx4A Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: She ran away with with the Gypsy's ✿ Posts: 2,519 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 5,316 Thanked 3,737 Times in 1,248 Posts Rep Power: 16689910	I am loving this idea, but I have to admit I am a bit speechless. You had me cracking up, and astonished at the same time. Nice writing BTW. I am going to have to let this marinade and see what arises. (no pun intended) Well maybe a little. You did a great job in setting up the characters. I'll be back. Pashi __________________ *Moon cat madness*

12-23-2011, 05:34 AM	#6
WomenMoveMe Member How Do You Identify?: I just wander about and be! Relationship Status: Caution: Dead End Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Kentucky Posts: 561 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 1,473 Thanked 2,099 Times in 417 Posts Rep Power: 21474851	I know... Yes...I know it is an odd sort of story. I sat to write something and that is what came out. I wish I could...and I know I should...explain myself...but I can't. At least you thought it was somewhat funny however strange the premise!