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Old 11-14-2011, 04:48 AM   #1
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Cool This really speaks to Syr

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craving.
per Masterful deliberate instructions...
You to see Your canvas
under Your command
i paint Your picture
see me
gripping tighter
squeeze
for You.
green eyes hungry
devoted
reaching
for breath
not yet
see me fall from grace
for Your pleasure
instruct me
Masterful, powerful unspoken truth
as You demand
Syr.
craving.
You to allow me
to replace my hand
with Yours.
please.
Syr.
You are at you're best here!
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Old 11-14-2011, 06:45 AM   #2
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u write is exceptional. For me the story comes to life. I want to Thank u for sharing. I hope to read more soon. U should be published.
Thanks very much!
it's nice when a reader can see it unfold.
i am currently submitting some things for a publishing company,
and in fact my Lil Red Riding Hood piece on the previous page is one they are considering,
and Bound, Blood Vow, and Walls... along with a few more from this thread.


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<3 <3 <3 this!
thank you kindly! i apprecitate that you took the time to read.


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You are at you're best here!
indeed, this one did speak to Syr.
thanks again for the kind words!
glad You are enjoying them.
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