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Old 05-09-2012, 10:42 AM   #1
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Morning Love Song

"Bitch,
I know you
didn't forget
to put some
Jim Beam
in my coffee!"
a coffee mug shatters
and coffee splatters
down the snarled lip
of black velvet Elvis.

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Variation on William Carlos Williams

This is just to say
I've eaten everything
in the icebox
(belch)
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Old 05-09-2012, 11:07 AM   #2
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Variation on the variation

This is just to say
You wouldn’t have known
How sweet or how cold
Those plums were
Had you not eaten them
Plus you finished all the milk
So no Cheerios instead
Forgive you, seriously?
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Old 05-09-2012, 11:08 AM   #3
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Great pick up and follow through - I'd be in a baton race with you any day, TS :-)

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Variation on the variation

This is just to say
You wouldn’t have known
How sweet or how cold
Those plums were
Had you not eaten them
Plus you finished all the milk
So no Cheerios instead
Forgive you, seriously?
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Old 05-09-2012, 12:10 PM   #4
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Morning Love Song

"Bitch,
I know you
didn't forget
to put some
Jim Beam
in my coffee!"
a coffee mug shatters
and coffee splatters
down the snarled lip
of black velvet Elvis.

==================================================

Variation on William Carlos Williams

This is just to say
I've eaten everything
in the icebox
(belch)
Oh jeez....These are effing hysterical....

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Variation on the variation

This is just to say
You wouldn’t have known
How sweet or how cold
Those plums were
Had you not eaten them
Plus you finished all the milk
So no Cheerios instead
Forgive you, seriously?
Ha ha ha!

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Who's smokin'?

It weren't long after
there were peals of loud laughter
I said thong, not bong.
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Variation #3

This is just to say
I slept with your friend
The one who sensed my hunger
And brought me breakfast in bed
Not cold plums, but
One perfect peach
Forgive me
It was delicious
Warm
Fuzzy
Soft
The juice running down my chin
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Variation #3

This is just to say
I slept with your friend
The one who sensed my hunger
And brought me breakfast in bed
Not cold plums, but
One perfect peach
Forgive me
It was delicious
Warm
Fuzzy
Soft
The juice running down my chin
Just pure writing talent! Classic!

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