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08-18-2012, 09:28 AM
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My first attempt at Gogyohka:
• 5 lines of free verse • No set syllable pattern • Short & succinct lines, governed by the duration of a single breath • Captures an idea, memory, observation or feeling in a few compelling words I think I may have missed the mark on "succinct"... .gif "Say What?") Anyway...Here it is: Is what you are experiencing Through lengthy conversations With eagerly parted lips enough to know both the satiation and the hunger of wholehearted love? |
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08-18-2012, 10:58 PM
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A second attempt at Gogyohka:
From the dock A tether breaks free from the mooring Adrift on a torpid lake The empty vessel is floating into the dawn And there is no one left to bear witness from the shore. |
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