fucku haiku

Diva · 11-16-2009, 09:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kam

The way I understand it is - The third line is the most important, it's what you're really talking about, the other two are descriptive in an 'off' way of the third, like:

The roaring lion
Ravishes its prey - consumes.
Oh! My dang head hurts.

But, what do I know?...

Discuss.

Now, MY dang head hurts
When I think of discussion.
"Fucku" means nothing?

<giggle>

KayCee · 11-16-2009, 10:05 AM

The bear woke up
spring flowers appear - light
Got to fix breakfast!

Kast · 11-16-2009, 10:24 AM

No, Diva, the "fuku" is an added twist to the mix... we like that which is slightly bent? Let me think of one?:

Fullerenes, squaline,
Mercury, no telling what all?
I'm not getting shot!

Diva · 11-16-2009, 10:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kam

No, Diva, the "fuku" is an added twist to the mix... we like that which is slightly bent? Let me think of one?:

Fullerenes, ethanol,
Mercury, no telling what all?
I'm not getting shot!

Bent does work for me.
Diva participates well!
Bend me baby, bend me good!

Kast · 11-16-2009, 10:39 AM

I liked your flowers, Kat. Is the bacon cooking? Pardon me, honey, while I spank Diva? Is that ok? (Been out here two minutes and in trouble already...)

KayCee · 11-16-2009, 10:47 AM

Yeah! Kam..do it NOW!..while she's bent..but ONLY if ya come by..been naughty too!..burnt the bacon!..LOL

Speaking about getting in trouble..FAST..!!

Queerasfck · 11-16-2009, 11:44 AM

Chester does back flips
has foamy rabid dog mouth
seeks new dog friends

Mister Bent · 11-16-2009, 07:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kam

No, Diva, the "fuku" is an added twist to the mix... we like that which is slightly bent?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Diva

Bent does work for me.

Quote:

Originally Posted by kat6071

Yeah! Kam..do it NOW!..while she's bent..but ONLY if ya come by..been naughty too!..burnt the bacon!..LOL

Y'all rang?

So, yeah, this is slight deviation from the true form of haiku, which has more "rules" than I posted here (but most importantly, a haiku should "paint a mental image in the reader's mind.") Despite rumors to the contrary, though, I'm not that uptight and simply borrowed the verse form for amusement sake.

Carry on.

Diva · 11-16-2009, 05:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kam

I liked your flowers, Kat. Is the bacon cooking? Pardon me, honey, while I spank Diva? Is that ok? (Been out here two minutes and in trouble already...)

Stop teasing me, You!
I like the spankings too much!
Bent over, I'll stay.....

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