Haiku~Youku~Meku:Poems Prose and Passion

Tommi · 11-17-2009, 09:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by rubber.ducky

um going to give this a try... but haikus were not my strong suit.. and I dont like having to put only a certain amount of words in a line.. so please dont be mad at me for not following that particular rule...

thou low stain perish
thee happier in decay
wisdom in death

oh yeah I should have warned you.. I am rather morbid... you can always tell me to go somewhere else..I will not be insulted or upset in any way.. so cheerio have a nice day

Quote:

Originally Posted by violaine

scratching maple leaf
quivering, indecisive
hovers like a crab
ready for some feet to chase
on a windless trail

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kam

Sugar Baby stuck in teeth,
What a glob of messed up mess.
Good to be among friends.

We have some good haiku.....YEAHHHHhhh..

See, that be you, me , we , haiku..seeeeee

shadows papa · 11-18-2009, 01:05 PM

Wolf waits in silence
As his mate heals her heart wounds
Solitude like night

Hawk soars far above
Unfettered by earthly bonds
Free from sorrow now

Bit · 11-18-2009, 01:39 PM

silly little dog
you are your mama's delight
please don't bark at night

violaine · 11-27-2009, 07:34 PM

look just to the left
and focus on the fencing
struggle in the night

shadows papa · 11-27-2009, 09:58 PM

Wolf stalks silently
Seeking the rushing lifeblood
Of prey held captive

Passionaria · 11-28-2009, 03:31 AM

living on steamed milk
lithe cats, masters of movement
devoted to pain

it begins so young
expressing pain beautifully
such fierce eloquence

when you watch her dance
you will never see her flinch
pain and art collide

Ballet, the dance of
eloquent masochism
art on bleeding toes

Passionaria

violaine · 11-28-2009, 02:40 PM

streams in november
measured beats, calling to flocks
en route to the roost

i feel them pulling
high in their sky heading east
kissed awake by sun

11-18-2009, 01:05 PM	#2
shadows papa Member How Do You Identify?: With a Warning Label Preferred Pronoun?: Her Bastard Relationship Status: Peaceful Easy Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Back Where I Come From Posts: 699 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 1,223 Thanked 1,643 Times in 484 Posts Rep Power: 3193789	Wolf waits in silence As his mate heals her heart wounds Solitude like night Hawk soars far above Unfettered by earthly bonds Free from sorrow now __________________ "Cry,cuss,sling snot, whatever. Just KEEP PEDALING!!" Shad

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shadows papa Member How Do You Identify?: With a Warning Label Preferred Pronoun?: Her Bastard Relationship Status: Peaceful Easy Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Back Where I Come From Posts: 699 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 1,223 Thanked 1,643 Times in 484 Posts Rep Power: 3193789	Wolf stalks silently Seeking the rushing lifeblood Of prey held captive __________________ "Cry,cuss,sling snot, whatever. Just KEEP PEDALING!!" Shad

11-28-2009, 03:31 AM	#6
Passionaria Senior Member How Do You Identify?: Urban Bohemian : http://youtu.be/IM96Ch9Gx4A Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: She ran away with with the Gypsy's ✿ Posts: 2,519 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 5,316 Thanked 3,737 Times in 1,248 Posts Rep Power: 16689910	Ballerina living on steamed milk lithe cats, masters of movement devoted to pain it begins so young expressing pain beautifully such fierce eloquence when you watch her dance you will never see her flinch pain and art collide Ballet, the dance of eloquent masochism art on bleeding toes Passionaria __________________ *Moon cat madness*

11-18-2009, 01:39 PM	#3
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