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Old 06-29-2013, 08:49 PM   #1
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I just swooned





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A draft...

The Telling

The office, finally quiet of the pain it still held...Luciana wrote her last therapy note in long hand and locked the pad in her desk. Thinking of her last client and her body relaxing after the experience of intense sensuality she felt with the beauty, her body still reeling with thought of the beauty.

Luciana turned off the light on her desk feeling sadness with what she already knew she would not do with her date this evening.

This place with it's trees, and gray skies was still a mystery. She got into her car, and turned on the ignition, her thighs still stinging with desire. Luciana pulled the car toward her date's address as she thought of herself as a relic of some other time, a distant place where control of Self was a virtue.

Mariana was already at the door at Luciana's arrival...opened door...helped her in...closed door, still Luciana's thighs were on fire as she got behind the wheel once again.

Luciana looked at Mariana across the table, the candlelight flickering, of course. This woman's green eyes, kind, desirable, as Luciana took in the tone of her eyes, their shape, the brilliance there and felt sacredness at their beauty, and sadness at knowing she would not kiss them, or even acknowledge their want. Luciana had taken Mariana home after dinner had brought itself to its end.

Luciana entered her home and began her next life...the phone rang..."Lu, I just wanted to know that you got home ok." Luciana could hear Mariana's breathing..."Yes, I got home ok. I'm getting to work now, I'll call you tomorrow.", Luciana said even as she thought she would not use the phone for the entire weekend.

Luciana took her jacket off, walked to her palette and immediately relaxed. Taking the cadmium red deep she thought it the color of blood...a good thought...she turned to her painting in progress, of the woman who had sat for it...and remembered the energy between them as Luciana painted her...and now alone, without her it felt safer...controlled...and Luciana grayed down the cadmium red deep and began to paint the lips that she had briefly tasted...and relaxed knowing she would go no further...no further...her need for self control imperative.

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That's it?

That's all we get to read?

Very interesting start. Would like to read more Greco.
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Luc sees her behind her desk, front office.
Luc opens the door and enters knowing that Claudia
doesn't know what Luc looks like nor that she is coming
to meet her this day.

Luc's gaze is steady, taking in Claudia as she approaches
the front reception desk...Luc wonders what her scent
will be, what temperature her skin at caress?

Luc stands in front of her silently savoring her
beauty with eyes that sense Claudia's surprise, and
feeling the energy of her wetness. Luc walks around
to the entrance of Claudia's station and extends
her hand, Claudia rises as she gives Luc her hand.

Luc draws Claudia to her gently.
Slowly Luc breathes her in, and places lips
warm, and hungry on Claudia's soft shoulder.

Luc then stands back and both look into
each others eyes with the knowing of its promise.

continuing

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Okay. It's been a loooong time.

Dear Greco, may we please receive a new installment?

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You have a way with words...Luc and Claudia are "dead in the water". This story I've decided not to continue, but who knows, I'm sure Luc is alive and well...smiling...and will have a story to tell.

Until then , Greco

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Dear Greco, may we please receive a new installment?

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Paper and Pen

This seems a beginning of words again...

Writing you...

Sometime if we ever live in a place called our home

I will still write you letters,
even while your in another room,

I will write

So that when I'm no longer there

You will know I have not
left you and that love
never dies.



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