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Old 03-23-2011, 08:54 PM   #1
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Default awakening.

blinded by darkness
i fall
crashing,
consumed in my own mind
reaching, fearing, embracing
myself
in Your mind fuck
my sweet terror
gloved hand wrapped around my throat
falling, emracing my fate
Your fury beckons me
beholden under Your power
my Saviour
at Your altar i lie
kneeling at Your feet
sweet salvation i crave
Your decadent madness
my gift
my sins cleansed
as the straps burn into my flesh
tears of red flow over silkened skin
crying for release
Your prize
free me
bring me to life
tighten Your grip
let me fly.
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Old 03-27-2011, 11:14 AM   #2
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craving.....
One to Master my complications
as powerful as how You Master my mind
as decadent as the Leather straps
that free my spirit
set fire to my flesh
it begs for Your sting
screaming for You
take Your prize
see me fly.
craving.....
One to Master my secrets
as commading as how You Master my body
beholden, bound within Your darkness
it's here that i sell my soul
to You
sweet barter, i offer You
Your price, my blood
maddening.
wash me clean.
craving.....
One to Master my spirit
as demanding as how You Master my will
behind the masks
gloved hand tracing softness
sweet girl falling
under the hand around her throat
see her fly?
craving.....
One to Master my want
as fierce as how You Master my ache
beholden within Your own
glorious beast inside You
insatiatable so long
free Your mind
come inside me
take it all
fly.
craving.....
One who'll Master my flight
as gentle as how You Master my fall
please
wait no more
release this girl
from her rusted chains
replace them
within Your Masterful own
soothe her skin, tend to her blood
touch her
after her fall.

constantly craving.....
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Old 04-08-2011, 05:33 PM   #3
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craving.
per Masterful deliberate instructions...
You to see Your canvas
under Your command
i paint Your picture
see me
gripping tighter
squeeze
for You.
green eyes hungry
devoted
reaching
for breath
not yet
see me fall from grace
for Your pleasure
instruct me
Masterful, powerful unspoken truth
as You demand
Syr.
craving.
You to allow me
to replace my hand
with Yours.
please.
Syr.
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Old 04-08-2011, 05:36 PM   #4
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Default red.

swirling
red
lines
beginnings
claim
my
canvas
click.
dance
unsheathed
fiery
cold.
deep
red
fires
sweetly
burn.
craving
deep.
fiery.
burn
into
me.
as
deep
red
as
the
lipstick
i
leave
behind
when
You
click.
and
i
open
my
deep
red
lips
to
receive
Your
steel.

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Default life anew.

darkness falls
deep within
fragile beauty
unchained
forgotten soul
she reaches out
for One
falling at Hys feet
she waits
for truth
heavy thud
precious Leather strips
skin broken,
raised
Hys
exquisite
stories
carve life
and
wash away
buried secrets
and
decadent sins
heavy thud
begins anew
life's breath
branded
fire
gloved Leather
choking
life
back from the dead
she rises
Hy carves
His place
in time
cold steel
ownership
of soul
deep maddening
presenting
Hym
new life
carved
into her soul
from
this day
flesh wanton
reaching
for faith
alive
heavy thud
don't dare
move
breathe
till
there
is nowhere
else
to go
canvas carved
in her blood
dripping
over her
as she falls
deep
dark, decadent
drop
Hys price
for
her
salvation.


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delicate, maddening
sweet,
burn into me
strips of Leather
bearing
my scent
controlled decadence
maddening
frighteningly sensual
cutting through
the air
Leather
engulfing my space
feared aniticipation
presence
behind me
delicious howl
Sadistic
seeking
sweet prey
tighten Your
grip
on my collar
breathless
gloved hand
seeking
delicate skin
squeeze tighter
i'm falling
Sir
heavy thud
bringing me
back
to You
chains rattle
for You
un-touched
canvas
beckoning You
carve Your
story
unto me
claim
ownership
like no other
before You
decadent burn
truth
deep red droplets
along my
skin
Your canvas
arches
to You
calling out
for more
begin again
sweet madness
bound
to You, for You
i was created
for You.
re-created
by You
beholden
i become again
Your key,
i am
locked in
to Your soul
i come alive
in Your collar
i earn my life
within Your chains
shiny new
i begin again
with
every lash
i am
Yours
now.
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craving.
per Masterful deliberate instructions...
You to see Your canvas
under Your command
i paint Your picture
see me
gripping tighter
squeeze
for You.
green eyes hungry
devoted
reaching
for breath
not yet
see me fall from grace
for Your pleasure
instruct me
Masterful, powerful unspoken truth
as You demand
Syr.
craving.
You to allow me
to replace my hand
with Yours.
please.
Syr.
You are at you're best here!
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u write is exceptional. For me the story comes to life. I want to Thank u for sharing. I hope to read more soon. U should be published.
Thanks very much!
it's nice when a reader can see it unfold.
i am currently submitting some things for a publishing company,
and in fact my Lil Red Riding Hood piece on the previous page is one they are considering,
and Bound, Blood Vow, and Walls... along with a few more from this thread.


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<3 <3 <3 this!
thank you kindly! i apprecitate that you took the time to read.


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You are at you're best here!
indeed, this one did speak to Syr.
thanks again for the kind words!
glad You are enjoying them.
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