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I shouted from Olympus
whispering there against your flesh so loudly that the dead night came alive in a bright swatch of moonlight silvered across your face like a shining blade tatooed upon your still-bleeding from old wounds cheek I connect small circles on your shoulder in ever-brightening light with touch lighter than you than I have imagined resided in fingertips that have delivered a thousand other messages in a million other welcoming eager hungry angry places on your perfectly mastered body Our synergized imperfect past has empassioned the us in you and I to claw our way to the pinnacle of betrayal of all they told us to hold dear and we could do that in the darkest of endless souless nights you and I... I insisting and you gratefully accepting that I am God of gods in every tone of ungodly voice... but the earth has shifted now You and I Us We are awash in moonlight I have never fallen to my humility in the light to speak unfamiliar words 'til I traced circles on your shoulders and whispered from Olympus with virgin voice so strong that even I believed the music in it
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Your poem evokes a feeling in me of dangerous, tenderness, feelings that are both soothing and unnerving at the same time, like a gently wind that caresses before the storm arrives. "in a bright swatch of moonlight silvered across your face like a shining blade tatooed upon your still-bleeding from old wounds cheek I connect small circles on your shoulder in ever-brightening light with touch lighter than you than I have imagined" "Our synergized imperfect past has empassioned the us in you and I to claw our way to the pinnacle of betrayal of all they told us to hold dear and we could do that in the darkest of endless souless nights" Haunting, acknowledging the cravings..... that calling to the darkness. Then back to your own surprise of tenderness....Fabulous evocative writing!! What a treat, Aye, Aye, Aye! Pashi
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Thanks Pashi and Spirit Dancer,
That's encouraging, coming from you two
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