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Old 02-28-2010, 06:46 PM   #1
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An energy play of dark depth, thank you for sharing your talent.




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"in a bright swatch of moonlight
silvered across your face
like a shining blade
tatooed upon your still-bleeding from old wounds cheek
I connect small circles on your shoulder
in ever-brightening light with touch lighter
than you
than I
have imagined"


"Our synergized imperfect past has empassioned the us
in you and I
to claw our way to the pinnacle of betrayal
of all they told us to hold dear
and we could do that
in the darkest of endless
souless
nights"

Haunting, acknowledging the cravings..... that calling to the darkness. Then back to your own surprise of tenderness....Fabulous evocative writing!! What a treat, Aye, Aye, Aye!

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Old 02-28-2010, 09:48 PM   #2
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An energy play of dark depth, thank you for sharing your talent.
Hi beautiful, this one is no1sboi's Poetry! He was kind enough to share it here, how cool is that??

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